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Keymaster
April 24, 2013 at 6:44 am
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Very well written, Sophie (and Mark). I was able to enjoy the story without being distracted by the awkward sentences, poor grammar or ridiculous dialogue so often present in cuckold fiction; well done.
Two chapters does not a book make though, obviously, so let me know when you have a more complete version to review!
